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[grauwulf]

a tortured heart
exquisit pain
found a friend lost
then lost a peice of heart again

soul full of words
mounth full of empty meaning
deep in my solitude
where shadows have feeling

fourtune : spoken
mending : broken
auroburos turned and choked to death on its own tail

honesty? honestly?
lie to myself again, so easy to tell you the truth

daedalus found the shore
but never truley flew
his son burnt and died
but he 'did' truley fly
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melencoly mistery 6/10/03

Comments

[astriarch.livejournal.com]

An excellent poem... how odd to critique it by saying it pains me to read it. Not because it is bad but because it ellicts the torture inside of me, sings to it almost. Excellent. Now I know my praise glances off to the darker mood that breathed this poem into life as all poems are creatures of our fiery passions.... If you need to talk contact me.

-Brian

[grauwulf.livejournal.com]

naw dude I'm okay, there is just a bunch of weird shiznit going on around here these days... We need to like hook up soon...

[(Anonymous)]

Arborous teaches us that every ending is also a beginning.